One of the crucial
environmental problemS nowadays is Energy crisis and greenhouse effect. Energy
productionin the moment is dominated
[passive, simple present. no need to mention in the moment] by non-renewable energy
resourceS such as coal, oil, gas etc ...
pay attention in plural/singular issuewe have to pay attention
aboutto perfect energy
formIt is indicated by several conditions namely; Neither take much space nor any carbon emission...
confusing sentenceclearly need to reviseAndhence, the predominantly solution is Fusion.
... British Association of Science conjectured
that's why the sun shines and it also the reason why
startsstars become illuminate
d .
... can be supplied by sea water
andwhile Tritium t
hat is super heavy hydrogen ...
... can also be considered to
be long-term energy resources
it iswhich conserveS until one million ...
Hence, it
is firmly
suggestssuggested that Fusion is the effective ...
concern about sentence stucture