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SarlindaDS_27 42 / 52 5  
Dec 1, 2016   #1
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Space telescope duo will showcase the solar system in 3D
By: Marcus Woo (October 31, 2016)


Along with the development of modern technology that increasingly sophisticated, it is not impossible for a scientist in the field of astronomy to create an observer incredible space tool . After all, had long since people are so curious about the landscape space. Therefore, scientists continue to try to create a solar telescope tool which capable of providing a space standpoint sharper, vivid and clear like being in space. According to latest news, the tool will be released in 2019 next to the name of James Webb Space Telescope (JWST), which will collaborate with the tool was first released that the Hubble Space Telescope, which has been operating for 26 years in space, through the combination of the sophistication of the two types of telescopes, then scientists or inventors are confident will be able to create a visualization of three-dimensional images which would be amazing. So, people would not curious anymore with the real picture of the nature of space. It will be able to give lessons and new knowledge to the public that the activity of the space that so fascinating to watch. Soon people will be really watching how natural the beauty of sky where the planet rotates each other in orbit, the comet was gliding with shiny tail and the atmospheric dust hovering over the planet Mars, all of it, of course, is fabulous.

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justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Dec 1, 2016   #2
Hi Sarlinda, I hope the suggested revisions below will help out.

- that is increasingly sophisticated,
- After all,it had been long since
- people are so curious about the landscape space.
- tool which is capable of providing
- a space standpoint that is sharper, vivid and clear
- According to the latest news,
- with the tool was first released that (...), are - confident that we will be able to create
- not be curious anymore with the real picture
- of the nature ofour space.
- space that sois fascinating to watchand interesting to learn .

There you have it Sarlinda, I hope the above remarks are valuable to your revision.For future writing reference, mind the linking verbs as you tend to miss them in your sentences.


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