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Summary Article - Trumps presidency could be good news for science


Abrahamlincoln 54 / 56  
Nov 14, 2016   #1
There are three essential bases will be concerned by the new president, Donald Trump, namely space exploration, infrastructure, and medicine. Those will be continued as usual or even improved. Even it comes with several considerations.

Firstly, space exploration. Trumps remarked his plan that NASA should more concern to human exploration and discover more about the solar system. While they give earth observation mission which aims to find the new way of climate change to national oceanic and atmosphere association. In addition, he is keen to rebuild more adequate public facilities such as airport and hospital. Even it is good news for American; some argue that it will contribute to climate change. He plans to allocate $ 1 billion for infrastructure budget, but when it comes to where he earns financial support, it is still unclear. Furthermore, Trump promised to allow importing drugs and ease approval process of generic drugs. It is clear that this will make medicine's price cheaper price and easier to access, not only medicine but only marijuana will be legalized in several states such as California and Nevada.

ichanpants89 [Contributor] 16 / 777 309  
Nov 14, 2016   #2
Hi Lincoln,
Here's my inputs and remarks towards your article summary. I hope you can follow through.

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- Those will be continuedThese particular issues will be developedusualas planned or even improved.
- EvenHowever, it comes up with several considerations.

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- ... to allow importing drugsmedicine and ease approval process of generic/affordable drugs.
- ...will make medicine's price cheaper price and easier to accessget , not only medicine but onlyalso marijuana will be legalized in several states ...


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