Hi Mate ,,,
Indonesia IS A COUNTRY WHICH IS popular with a lot of BREATHTAKING sites
that shows the good scenery of nature.
THIS IS REDUNDANCY,,, CHOOSE ONE OF THEM ( ALSO OR AND) famous
FOR a wide variety of ...
One of the type flora ORIGINALLY from Indonesia PARTICULARLY IN BENGKULU. THIS IS often called Arnoldii ...
HOWEVER, THIS FLOWER IS BECOMING MORE AND MORE ENDANGERED
to as the biggest flora in the world and the nearly extinct, namely Arnoldii Rafflesia
. This flower has grown in two places, namely in Bengkulu and in Sumatra.
FOR THOSE who wanted to see
ORIGINAL HABITAT OF SUCH FLOWER,
the largest flower (...) almost extinct
the public could witness this rare event and
Taba Penanjung Forest in ...
AS THIS FLOWER BECOME ENDANGER, THIS
Rafflesia Arnoldi Flower has
attracted much attention of ...
GERHANA SITE, "People have come to visit
NOT NECESSARY TO PUT COMMA HERE although it is not a holiday.
PAY ATTENTION ON :
1. SUBJECT VERB AGREEMENT
2.THE PRECISE PLACE OF PUNCTUATION
3 GRAMMATICAL ACCURACYS+V ALTOUGH S + V
OR ALTHOUGH S V, S V
4 LEXICAL RESOURCETHE MOST APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY FOR LANDSCAPE ARE BREATHTAKING, STUNNING, MARVELOUS, PICTURESQUE AND SO ON
5. ATTEMPT TO WRITE WELL-ORGANIZE PARAGRAPH