Hi Mate ,,,
Indonesia IS A COUNTRY WHICH IS popular with a lot of BREATHTAKING sites
that shows the good scenery of nature. .
And also THIS IS REDUNDANCY,,, CHOOSE ONE OF THEM ( ALSO OR AND) famous
with FOR a wide variety of ...
One of the type flora ORIGINALLY from Indonesia PARTICULARLY IN BENGKULU. THIS IS often called Arnoldii ...
HOWEVER, THIS FLOWER IS BECOMING MORE AND MORE ENDANGERED
to as the biggest flora in the world and the nearly extinct, namely Arnoldii Rafflesia . This flower has grown in two places, namely in Bengkulu and in Sumatra.
THESE DAYS,
Many people FOR THOSE who wanted to see
live ORIGINAL HABITAT OF SUCH FLOWER,
the largest flower (...) almost extinct ,
the public could witness this rare event and THEY can
come VISIT
to Taba Penanjung Forest in ...
AS THIS FLOWER BECOME ENDANGER, THIS
Rafflesia Arnoldi Flower has attracted much attention of ...
Based on
Gerhana.co. GERHANA SITE, "People have come to visit
,
NOT NECESSARY TO PUT COMMA HERE although it is not a holiday.
VITAL NOTE:
PAY ATTENTION ON :
1. SUBJECT VERB AGREEMENT
2.THE PRECISE PLACE OF PUNCTUATION
3 GRAMMATICAL ACCURACY
S+V ALTOUGH S + V OR
ALTHOUGH S V, S V4 LEXICAL RESOURCE
THE MOST APPROPRIATE VOCABULARY FOR LANDSCAPE ARE BREATHTAKING, STUNNING, MARVELOUS, PICTURESQUE AND SO ON5. ATTEMPT TO WRITE WELL-ORGANIZE PARAGRAPH