... many young people prefer
livingto live with their immediate family. According to
the recent research of the Pew (...) one or both parents,
compared towhile 31.6% living with a spouse ...
The result of
an increase in young Americans livingthe increasing number of those who live with their parents reached ...
In 1960, the
portionpercentage of young persons (...) peaked at 62% but
at the same year the share ...
Interestingly,
the figure of Living with mom and dad has increased
more every year.
... research of the Pew Research Center in 2014, .... reached a peak at 35% in 1940. In 1960,
there are three years mentioned here, but it is unclear is it from the same research or it is a comparison to the preceding research.at all, you still need to concern on your sentence completion and the flow of your writing.