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Summary: More Young Americans Live with Parents Than With Lovers


bung ilham 14 / 30  
Sep 13, 2016   #1
In the meantime, many young people prefer living with their immediate family. According to recent research of the Pew Research Center in 2014, 32.1% of Americans aged 18 to 34 years old were living with one or both parents, compared to 31.6% living with a spouse or a romantic partner. The result of an increase in young Americans living with their parents reached a peak at 35% in 1940. In 1960, the portion of young persons living with a partner peaked at 62% but the same year the share living with parents dropped significantly at about 20%. Interestingly, Living with mom and dad has increased more every year. This is owing to numerous factors such as people choosing to get married later and a drop economic prospect for young men. The study showed the employment of men saw a dramatic decrease from 84% in 1960 to 71% in 2014, compared to young women for whom economic prospects have improved in the last 50 years.

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Gian16 2 / 6  
Sep 13, 2016   #2
... young people prefer(to live)with their close family.

Interestingly, Living with mom and dad(have) has increased every year. This is owing to numerous factors (for instance) people choose to get ...

Such as, n+ n+n
For example/instance : s+v
RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Sep 14, 2016   #3
... many young people prefer livingto live with their immediate family. According tothe recent research of the Pew (...) one or both parents, compared towhile 31.6% living with a spouse ...

The result of an increase in young Americans livingthe increasing number of those who live with their parents reached ...
In 1960, the portionpercentage of young persons (...) peaked at 62% but at the same year the share ...
Interestingly, the figure of Living with mom and dad has increased more every year.

... research of the Pew Research Center in 2014, .... reached a peak at 35% in 1940. In 1960,

there are three years mentioned here, but it is unclear is it from the same research or it is a comparison to the preceding research.

at all, you still need to concern on your sentence completion and the flow of your writing.
Fira28 6 / 10  
Sep 14, 2016   #4
Hello bung ilham, here i left the comment for you

• In the meantime, many young generation prefer living ...

• In 1960, the portion of teenagers living with a partner peaked ...


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