Your writing is good, but I have some corrections which may help you.
1. Well, you need to upload the graph so that the readers can providing meaningful feedback for your writing.
2. Be careful of using synonyms. "new" and "novel" have the same or nearly the same meaning, but used to give different meanings.
A comparison regarding the result of a survey of novel shopping places in Auckland,I do not think that "new" here can be replaced by "novel" as novel is used with these nouns: approach, concept, context, feature, finding, idea, insight, method, phenomenon, situation, type (© Oxford University Press, 2009).
3. I suggest you to write "males" and "females", or "men" and "women" (the plural form).
the proportion of male experiences lower than female in dissatisfied in restaurant,
Allow me to rewrite it: males express less dissatisfied than females with the restaurants
It also can be seen that the design shows satisfied as the higher percentage.
Who is satisfied? the design or the shoppers (females-males)?. You may want to write something like: It also can be seen that the majority of both sexes are pleased with the new design.
the figures of people who feel satisfied on the design of the
restaurant and shops centreshopping complex are higher than others, representing over three-fifths of all shoppers . The percentage shows 62 percent of people.
In this case, the proportion of male and female have an equal number (20 percent) in shopping area and in restaurant, the percentage of female shows higher than male which is at 21 percent.
This sentence is bit confusing. I come up with another idea of it: Equal numbers (20 percent) of both sexes show they are unhappy with the shops. Meanwhile, only one in twenty of males are displeased with the restaurants compared to just over a fifth of females.
Good luck. Cheers!