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The table gives a clue on consumer spending on different articles


mardian24 46 / 75  
Nov 8, 2016   #1
The table gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table illustrates the information about the percentage of items that people buy in five different countries in 2002. Overall, it can be seen that food/drink/tobacco dominated item which was bought over five countries while leisure/education was less favorite.

Turkey has the biggest percentage in food/drink/tobacco item at 32.14 percent when Sweden was the smallest at 15.77 percent. This category always has the percentage above 15 percent. The next item was clothing/footwear which is dominated by Italy at 9 percent while Sweden was the smallest at 5.40 percent. The last item was leisure/education which has score under 5 percent. Spain has the smallest percentage at 1.98 percent and the smallest from the all items.

Sweden has the lowest percentage in two items at 15.77 percent and 5.40 percent when Turkey has the highest percentage in two items at 32.14 percent and 4.35 percent. The second fovurite item was clothing/footwear which has the percentage between 5 percent and 10 percent.
Pramudia27 34 / 55 2  
Nov 8, 2016   #2
hello Mr. Mardian..
this is my suggestion for you

... leisure/education was less favoritefavourite .

.../tobacco item at 32.14 percent when Sweden (...) at 15.77 percen t.
... percentage above 15 percen t.
... dominated by Italy at 9 percent while Sweden (...) at 5.40 percent.
... has score under 5percent .
... percentage at 1.98percent and the smallest ...

... percentage in two items(two item containing....) at 15.77 percent (...) in two items at 32.14 percent and 4.35 percent . The second fovuritefavourite item was clothing/footwear (...) between 5 percent and 10 percent .

Percent==> to avoid repetition, you should mention it in introduction
maybe, you should attach your table inasmuch as other people do not know your data
ReskiRamadani88 43 / 57 5  
Nov 8, 2016   #3
Hello Mardian!
I want to give you some suggestion.

it can be seen that food/drink/tobacco dominated

food/drink/tobacco = diet
it can be seen that diet dominated

... which is dominated by Italy at 9 percent

by -> use for the differences
...which was dominated in Italy at 9 percent

The second favorite item was clothing/footwear ...

Just for suggestion, it will better if you use "the things" as comparison not the country.
It will easy for you to make the comparison for each country and each goods.

Hope it helps you :)


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