please showing your table by clicking the word "[+] image" the next time
Ok, you know how to write, but there are still some trivial mistakes.
"down-ward tendency to compare with...", there is no such phrase. "in comparison with" or "compared to' are right phrase.
"reach its peak with the higher ...". I think it is grammatically wrong, so I would fix "the number of factories was reported to reach its peak which was three times higher, as opposed to the data in 1851. Remember to have a comma, otherwise it will degrade your grammar score.
"in which the data of female was as twice as male.". You should write "male's", you were talking about the "data of male"