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The table shows secondary school attendance during period of 2000 to 2009


dils 20 / 33 2  
Sep 29, 2016   #1
The table shows secondary school attendance during period of 2000 to 2009. Generally, the trend reveals gradual descent of attendance in Specialist Schools, Grammar Schools, and Voluntary-controlled Schools. Meanwhile, in Community Schools the tendency of attendance has risen from 2000 to 2009.

Specialist Schools experience 2% of descent from 2000 to 2009. This is suggested that there is a decline about 0,2% related with attendance every year. Moving over to Grammar Schools, from 2000 to 2005 the change was lower than the period of 2005-2009; those are 5% and 7%.

Moreover, in keeping with Voluntary-controlled Schools, the alteration over 2000 to 2005 and 2005-2009 gradually increased 14% and 18%. One interesting fact, that in Community Schools, the progress was different with increased preference number concerned with secondary school attendance. From 2000 to 2005, the increase is 20% and from 2005-2009 is 26% which on average, there is 5,1% of increase in secondary school attendance annually.




ryan31 65 / 96 15  
Sep 29, 2016   #2
hallo dila
I have several suggestions for you

... attendance during period offrom 2000 to 2009.

Specialist Schools experienced 2% of descent ...

Moreover, in keeping with Voluntary-controlled Schools, (...) and 2005-2009 gradually increasedincreased gradually 14 % and 18%.

thanks
Att98 5 / 7  
Sep 30, 2016   #3
hello, here i left comment for you.

The table shows ==>(you can paraphrase the word with describes, illustrates, intences) secondary school attendance ...
Generally, the trend revealsexpose gradual descent of attendance(you have done repetition) in Specialist Schools,..
... over 2000 to 2005 and 2005-2009 gradually increased increased gradually ...


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