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Taklimakan Desert is one of the famous wilderness in Asia


Afdhel 14 / 21 1  
Oct 11, 2016   #1
Taklimakan Desert is one of the famous wilderness in Asia, located at Xinjiang, China. Having the level of broadness up to 337,600 kilometers, Taklimakan becomes the second largest desert in the world after the Sahara Desert in Africa. The majority of Taklimakan Desert's contour consists of sand dunes up to 250 meters high that are mostly consisted of plants.

Three Taklimakan plants namely Populus euphratica, Tamarix ramosissima, and Alhagi sparsifolia have a specific character because they are fertile in the desert. Besides, each plant possesses various of kinds self-mechanism to survive. For instance, Populus euphratica manages distillation process by opening and closing stomata on the foliage surface in reaction to a couple of moisture being lost pass through the leaves to the covering air.

Meanwhile, Tamarix ramosissima, the tiny cedar, popular as a salt tree, delivers the very huge volume of water through a remote root system many times the dimension of the plant above land. Tamarisk is able to dictate unconsciously when closing stomata to occupy evaporation and oversee photosynthesis.

Alhagi Sparifolia, a spiny thicket, grow up in the Taklimakan Desert although it utilizes great amounts of water. Differs from Tamarix ramosissima and Populus euphratica which overt and lock stomata depends on conditions on the foliage surface, Alhagi Sparifolia does so follow the hydraulic conductance.
PHA2016 39 / 62 4  
Oct 12, 2016   #2
Hello Afdhel,

... up to 337,600 kilometers, Taklimakanit [pronoun ] becomes the second...
... dunes up to 250 meters high that it are mostly consisted of plants.

... as a salt tree, delivers theare very huge volume of water...

.., Alhagi Sparifolia does soto follow the hydraulic conductance.

hope these help
Gigih12 10 / 8  
Oct 12, 2016   #3
Hello mr. Afdhel, thank you for your comment before..here is my advices:

... in Asia, located atin Xinjiang, China. (If you want to use at, you can change your sentence into "located at Xinjiang Province , China)

Three Taklimakan plants namelysuch as Populus euphratica, (...) because they are fertile in the desert.

... possesses various of kinds of self-mechanism to survive.

... euphratica manages its distillation process by .....(or you can change into manages to distill by.....)

..., the tiny cedar, popularwell-known as a salt tree, delivers the very huge volume of .......

I think your writing is good, good job and keep witing :)


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