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Is talent a key element for children to become professionals?

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Oct 29, 2012   #1
Recently, there is a hot topic that whether talent is key element can help children become a professional person in any aspects or not. Some people believe that each children have equality opportunity to be a athletic or musician while another people regard talent as a significant point for children to become a expert in some parts.

The first kind of people ,who believe every children can be toughy to become a expect, except children have different knowledge. Firstly, various knowledge can help children find which is them interested. Children like a white paper,thus,we need taught them to help them become expert. Unless,the skill will help them in them future life. For instance, when children feel tired about them study, they can play football or play piano to relax. Secondly, it is right of children to learn how to become a good sports person or musician. Nobody can choice which them need learn or not.

On the other hand, some people think that only the children who have certain talents can become a professional. Specifically, they believe that we should put the limited teacher and fund to taught the talent kid. It means that taught all of the children is waste resource. Besides that, children learning together, talent children and generally children, will bring stress to generally student. It is not benefit for children`s psychological health.

In my opinion, we should taught children different kinds of skills which can help them find a good job. Meanwhile,we can pay more attention about the children who have certain talent. They have highly percent possible to become a good sports or musician.

tannerscooter 6 / 14 1  
Oct 29, 2012   #2
Before I correct grammar and word use, could you please provide the prompt so that we may get a better idea of what you are trying to get at?
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Nov 5, 2012   #3
Thank you very much.
The question is "Discuss should we teach all of children to be expert or only teach the children who have talent."

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