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The more we talk to others, the more links gets stronger - 7 Ways to Make Conversation With Anyone


Dioba 68 / 104 7  
Sep 28, 2016   #1
Conversations are links. Every time we talked with someone we never know before, a tiny link is formed. The more we talk to others, the more links gets stronger. In every conversation construct new links. Conversation is interesting process. The benefits of this process are establish a connection, process learn something new, gives a whole new perspective and experience for us. The major question is how to make a conversation with anyone. Malavika Varadan, a radio presenter, she has a conversation with almost 1.6 million people that she never seen every morning. She suggests some advice about how to make conversation with anyone. First, word flood gates, it is means said first word in the beginning of conversation will affect everything. Second, she suggest skip the small talk. That means leaving the chit chat and directly to the personal question. Third, find something that us and other person might have in common. Furthermore, give a unique impression and ask for an notion.

BAMS14 18 / 29  
Sep 28, 2016   #2
Conversations are links. Every time we ARE talkeSd with s omeone we never know beforeWITHSTRANGERa tiny link is formedIS MAKE LINK .

The more we talk to others, the more links gets strongerHONESTLY IM CONFUSED WITH THIS SENTENCES
In every conversation construct new links EVERY CONVERSATION CREATES NEW LINKS.

1. ATTENTION STRUCTURE (S+V+O)
2. USE CONJUNCTION TO CREATES FLOW PARAGRAPH
3. USE MORE VOCABULARIES

GOOD LUCK!
erwiin1 9 / 17  
Sep 28, 2016   #3
Hi, Dioba
Your essay is very good, but I would give you corrections

1. The more we talk to others, the more links gets (get ) stronger.
2. The benefits of this process are establish (establish ) a connection, process learn (learns ) something new, gives a ...
3. she never seen (saw ) every morning.
4. it is means (means ) said first word in the ...
5. she suggest skip (suggests skipping ) the small talk.
6. find something that us and other person (we and another person ) might have in common.
7. ... unique impression and ask for an notion (a notion ).

Thank you
akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Sep 28, 2016   #4
Hi Dioba..
These are my thoughts for what you wrote. Hopefully, these below can help you.
GOOD LUCK


(You are supposed to introduce the video which you reviewed to ease readers who wanna get the information about the link) .
Every time WHAT we talked with someone IS WHAT we never know before PREVIOUSLY, BECAUSE THAT IS a tiny link is formed (make you sure that what you write is what is in your mind) .

.., the more links gets stronger. In every conversation constructS THE new links. THE Conversation is AN interesting process. The benefits of this process are establishING a connection, process learnING THE PROCESS OF something new, gives GIVING a whole new perspective ...

Malavika Varadan, a radio presenter, she has a THE conversation with (...) that she HAS never seen every morning. She suggests ED some advice about how to make THE conversation with anyone. First, word floodgates, itS is means said MEANING IS THAT first word in the ...

Second, she suggestED TO skip the small talk.
Third, findING something that us WE and ANother person might have in common. Furthermore, THE LAST STEP IS give GIVING a unique impression and askING for a notion.
andika_soppeng - / 16 2  
Sep 28, 2016   #5
hi

DIOBA

I AM GLAD TO READ YOUR WRITING,THERE ARE SEVERAL MATTER WHICH YOU NEED TO PAY ATTENTION, HOWEVER.

Conversations are links. Every time (PRESENT TENSE) we talked TALK with TO someone we never ...
... the more links WE GET gets stronger . In every conversation construct CONSTRUCTS new links.
... this process are TO establish a connection, TO process IN learnING something new, TO GIVE gives a whole new perspective ...
The major question is how to make START a conversation with TO anyone. Malavika Varadan, a radio presenter, SAID she has a conversation (...) that she HAD never seen every morning. She suggests some advice ADVICES about how to make conversation with TO anyone.THE First, word flood gates, it is means THAT said first word ...

THE Second, she suggestS skip the small talk. IT means THAT leaving the chit chat ...
THE Third, find something that us WE and other personS might have in common.

NOTE:
PAY ATTENTION ON

COLLOCATION
SUBJECT VERB AGREEMENT
TENSES
ATTEMPT TO USE LOW FREQUENCY VOCABULARIES

KEEP WRITING MATE


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