Teachers at Fatoni University - writing skills practice

Hi guys! I am new user. I wanna practice my writing skills. If I am wrong correct me

describing professors from my university

During my student's life at Fatoni University, I had many teachers. Some of them were good while some were bad. In my first year student, I thought I found someone who could be my best teacher. She is an Arabic teacher and teaches me about Arabic course. She is single. She has a good shape, black eyes, an oval face, light, and smooth skin. What makes her amazing is her big shiny black eyes and she has the kindest eyes that I have ever seen. My best teacher is someone who walks into my life without any expectation or returns for me. She always helps me when I have a problem with her course because I am not good in the Arabic language, but she patients and try hard to make me more understand about the Arabic language. She is like my sister because she always pays attention to me and always asks me about the study. She loves to bake cakes and cookies. This is sound so much more interesting about her. She learned baked cakes and cookies with herself, by practice and watching from Internet and YouTube. She always bakes a chocolate cake give to students, her chocolate cake it tastes like a piece of chocolate heaven. It melts in your mouth with a delicious warming sensation. Lastly, overall this is the best teacher I have ever seen in my life.

👉🏻 Correct me if I am wrong

In my opinion,
You have lots of errors regarding spelling and grammar. My advice for you is to test and see the problem using online free grammar and spelling checkers.

Also try not to use word that are not polite like bad, just try to find other words to express this.
If you really want to describe a professor as a student, it will be nice to focus from the teaching learning perspective.

During my student's student life
In my first year student, I thought...be my best favourite teacher
... teaches me about the Arabic course language
... black eyes - and she has the kindest ...
My best favorite teacher ... life without any expectation or returns for me
... because I am not good in struggle with the Arabic language, but she patients is very patient

try tries hard to make help me more better understand ...
She learned HOW TO bake cakes and cookies with herself by watching ...

Afnan, this presentation is asking you to describe someone from your past. Therefore you should be using the past presentation for all your reference points in the essay, not the present. In addition to that, you have to familiarize yourself with word formations. Student with an apostrophe S is different from students without the apostrophe S or student without the apostrophe S. The apostrophe S in the word "Student's" describes ownership while "students" refers to the plural form of the singular "student". You were a student at the time so no apostrophe S or additional S at the end.

Learn to use paragraphs instead of a straight single paragraph presentation. Using paragraphs allows the reader to read the text in an easier format. It also gives you more room for the descriptive process and allows for a fuller discussion or presentation of the given topic.

Not a bad attempt at descriptive writing though. It's definitely descriptive and imaginative. I would say you have potential when it comes to this type of writing.