There is no doubt that parents and school have the biggest role
ofin raising children onwithgood manners .
Everything has two sides and teaching children issue is not an exception
...hey, this is not an issue. It is only a view about who plays a major role in cultivating good manners in children. Saying this, you tend to go out of topic :(
those who disagree point out that school is the suitable place for learning that ....those who disagree with this, point out that school has greater responsibility in this regard.
There is a strong argument concerning the school is the most appropriate place to learn how to be a good member in the community ,because the child spends time in school would be more than the time he spends at his or her home.
... my advice is to avoid writing very long sentences and making them too complicated with too many words. You may get carried away by this habit.Those who believe that school plays a more vital role in teaching children how to become good members in society, argues that children spend more time in school than at their homes.