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Teaching how to do good manners are one of parents' role, they should lead kids in the right way.


hailun11 12 / 14 3  
Aug 28, 2016   #1
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


To be a good social order in community is needed for all humans. There are encourages between parents and school to collaborate in this situation. I believe, both them would influence children to have nice civilization, and it will be discussed extend here.

Parents are place for kids to get much direction about anything, in particularly how to teach them to be sociality with each other. However, the role of parents is teaching children in good manners when children get position outside or beyond at home. Family could put the patterns of sociality through respectable habit in order to become nice person in member society. It is very easy to be applied in daily activity at home for example. Then, childhood immediately would adopt this manner.

It is also encouraged by school that makes them more friendlier with other friends. Because education in school is not only for learning science but also that place to construct a lot of practical in life. For instance, students could make study club together with their colleagues which make them associate in a moment. The behaviors many cultures in school caused others, can make them feeling togetherness every work day in class or surrounding school.

Therefore, I assume that parents are part of guide for their children and school is residence for kids to build well-behaved in participant culture.
Dipa19 8 / 13  
Aug 28, 2016   #2
I hope my correction is true..

To be being a good social order in a community is needed for all humans.
... and school to collaborate in this situation. I believe, both of them would influence ...
ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Aug 28, 2016   #3
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Parents should give children much direction about anything

the role of parents is teaching children in good manners
teaching children how to do good manners are one of parents' role

childhood immediately would adopt this manner
children would immediately adopt this manner
nazzia30 5 / 13  
Aug 28, 2016   #4
To be a good have social order in community ...
Both parents and the school have a vital role to play in order to achieve this. I believe, both them would influence children to ...

Parents are place for kids to get much direction about ... Children look to their parents to teach them how to behave socially. It is the parents' behavior that is emulated by the children and therefore, the right teachings and manners should be inculcated in impressionable children to become productive members of society.

For instance, students develop their social skills by becoming parts of group activity in school with their peers.

The behaviors many cultures in school caused others, can make ... Being a part of a diverse environment, children learn the importance of tolerance and respect for other cultures. The diverse environment of a school is a perfect set up for children to learn this.

Therefore, I assume that parents are part of guide for their children ... Therefore, I believe the onus to raise socially responsible children and productive citizens lies both with the parents and the authorities of the school system.


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