i am writing about this topic to check my writing skills. i appeal to any moderator to please check it i will be very thankful to you.
Plz check it and take out the mistakes i will be very thankful to you. the essay statement is given belowImprovements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer
nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for
helping the poorer nations in such areas.
yes i agree with this statement that richer countries should help the underdeveloping countries in the field of health, education and trade. Contemporary these fields play a substantial role that no one can survive without these. Health is the major factor in poor countries which need to be considered for example the health factor in south africa is so much worse that they cannot overcome this without the help of richer countries. The most epidemic disease is the AID in this country which can be prevent if the richer countries provides the medicines, nurses and docttors free and every other amenities without any incentives.
Education also plays an important role in the development of every nation. The poor countries which are not good in this field should be supported by richer countries for example now a days so many countries are offeering the free masters programme for students of underdeveloped countries but the main problem is that it should not restricted to the masters level because there are some countries which could not give education to the college level and even to the primary level so the government of richer countries should provision them free used books. There is also one possibility that the richer countries can also give the pirated coppies to these such poor countries
Trade also plays an important role in the ecnomic development of every country. The countries which are not good in this field must be supported by richer countries. This can only be done when some of the taxes are raised off for the poor countries for a given period of time and when they thrive then you can take the taxes on the mainly basis. The second option to overcome this problem is to give the subsidy without any incentives or interest. The world bank should give the subsidy to poor countries without any interest. By doing this there is no pressure of debt on the poor countries and they flourish effectively. The sbsidy given to these countries should not for the prolonged time because by doing this the countries will become used to with it. There is must an agreement .
In conclusion i must say that richer countries should help the poor countries in such fields for their evolutionBest Regard:
Yes, I think you did a good job, but it could be better. I hope the grammar suggestions help. You write in a "wordy" manner which means extended sentences with lots of ideas and word packed in. Try to write more simply, clear concise and straightforward. I would suggest that you give 3 examples to support your argument that technology does not make traditions die out. You explain Christmas and baseball, choose one more thing that people will continue to do no matter how technology changes. I thought that cooking would be a good example, because many people keep the traditional meals from generation to generation without the need of technology. Nice work so far, if you revise this, feel free to post it in this thread and I will edit it for you :)
Thankyou for your kind suggestion. I am preparing for the IELT's test and in the writing section they asked to write atleast 250 words for the topic so kindly tell me what should i do. Once again thanks for your generous support.
yes i agree with this statement thatWealthy countries should help theunderdeveloped countries in the fields of health, education and trade. Currently, these fields play an essential role that no one can survive without thesein the preservation of society .
Health is the major factor in poor countries which need to be considered for example the health factor in south africa is so much worse that they cannot overcome this without the help of richer countries.
You may want to say: "Without the help of richer countries, poor countries such as South Africa would be unable to help sick people."
The most epidemic disease in that country is
theAIDs, in this country which can be prevented if the richer countries could provide the medicine, nurses and doctorsto care for people. free and every other amenities without any incentives.
Trade also plays an important role in theeconomic development of every country. The countries
which are not good in this fieldwith bad economies must be supported by richer countries.
Thamk you so much for your kind response. The line which you ,emtion i meaqn to say that the richer countries should provide them the photocopies of that books.
Jenni i also write the essay about the 'museum' plz check it also if you have some time i will be very thankful to you once again thankyou for giving me your precious time. tell me about the people in america did they allright and also you because last week i heared the news of flood.
I think when we want to say about our ideas, we should have a open thinking. My mean is in many aspect of the problem. Firstly, we should think about why other people say the technology makes the traditional skills fade (such as in traffic, in communicate, in entertainment, in education, in services...) . Secondly, we should list the major reasons to explain your ideas, which have affected to most of people to get their agreement.
its a longg time ago that i talk you about the IELTS so i passed the IELTS test and achieving a band score of 6 out of 9. Could you give me a favour. Please read these art
its a longg time ago that i talk you about the preperation of IELTS so i passed the IELTS test and achieving a band score of 6 out of 9. Could you give me a favour. Please read these articles and pin out the grammer mistakes. i will be very thankful to you if you give me time to read my aricles and also please give me feed back.
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