TED Talk Summary: Alzheimer is normal aging, we can cure it

This is summary of video in TED talk by Samuel Cohen. The title of video is "Alzheimer is normal aging, we can cure it". Alzheimer illness is original name of Dr. Alois Alzheimer, and he found it from 1040 years ago. Alzheimer deceases infected for 40 million people in the world before 21 century, and 1070 million people in 21 century. Only one of two persons can be survive from this illness. The scientist found that Alzheimer is the biggest social challenges in this generation. Also, it spreading can be decrease slightly.

In the present time, many scientists confused about causal factor of Alzheimer deceases. Because, it is the biggest causal of death before cancer illness. Alzheimer works significantly destroy brain's process such as memory and mental ability. But now, they innovate drugs to cut infection of spreading viruses. The drugs works by cutting off virus replications specifically. Those work with farm industry to develop Alzheimer vaccine cheaper than others.

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1.This is a summary of video in TED talk by Samuel Cohen.
2.he found it from 1040 years ago.
3.Only one of two persons can be survive from this illness.
4.The drugs sworkwork （take effect） by cutting off virus replications specifically.
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