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TED Talk Summary; Nicholas Stern: The State of The Climate - and What We Might Do about it


rizaldohabibie 19 / 35  
Sep 21, 2016   #1
Countries, nowadays, face remarkable enhances on the urban areas and economic achievement but they are vulnerable to overcome the impact of environmental destruction from the cities' development. Society need to undertake the two fundamental transformations for the next better centuries.

First and foremost, basic structure of changing in economic society should be considered as a necessity because energy and gasses consumption will be doubled in the next hundred years. Following that, public must pay attention into the cities, energy, and land management in order to transform a fine relationship between human being with the planet.

The second transformation, people must succeed low carbon economy in the next two decades. Mega-cities should be designed in compact way to diminish energy consumption, business trend should be innovated into renewable investment, and transportation modes should be altered into non-polluting ways by reducing, reusing and recycling all sorts of things together with an array of communities.

To convert those means effectively needs supports from all components from government officials to the citizenries to centre attention which can deliver a better growth of the climate world.
BAMS14 18 / 29  
Sep 21, 2016   #2
hallo rizal
there are few suggestion for you

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Following that , (NOT ONLY ABOVE, BUT,) public must pay attention into ...

transform a fine(GOOD/KIND/BEST) relationship between(FOLLOWING S AND S) human being with the planet.

people must succeed lowREDUCE carbon economy in the next two decades LATTER .
Yonathan 46 / 65 5  
Oct 6, 2016   #3
Hi Aldo
Let me give you some correction

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Mega-cities should be designed in a ` compact way to (...), the business trend should be ...

Thank you...


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