TED_Video: How to Be a Good Mentor
A good mentor created many great students. Be a good mentor likened as a leader in the team. Which a good team or needs a good mentor to guide them. Like Mrs. Margaret Heffernan ever said that: "a good team, they had three characteristics, the really successful teams, First, they showed high degrees of social sensitivity to each other. Secondly, the successful teams gave roughly equal time to each other. Thirdly, had women in them. But, the keys, their social connectedness to each other."
It related to the ways to be a good mentor. There are some steps, as, approach each mentorship differently, set expectations together in the very beginning, take a genuine interest in your mentee as a person, know when to wait before giving advice, improve your emotional intelligence, do not assume anything about your mentee, be really forthcoming about mistakes you have made, celebrate students achievements, give more than you ask for, seek out classes or project related to skills your mentee wants to develop, solve for the long-term, lead by sample.
But, being a good mentor takes practice and patience. Understand how to communicate with the students, and you will learn a lot about yourself, whether you are able to provide a vision that motivates and help others, and so on. Like Mrs. Margaret ever said that "Arup believes that the culture of helpfulness is central to their success".
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Hi Hanachi,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps useful for you
1. In which a good team needs a good mentor to guide them
2.likened ----> like
3. a good team, they had three characteristics for become the real successful teams.
4.Be carefull with punctuations.
... really successful teams,First, they showed ...-----> put dot, not comma before "first".
5.Thirdly , had women in them....---->better if you use first,second and the last to close the explanation sentence.
6.There are some steps, as,including approach each mentorship differently
halo, here are my suggestions for you
A good mentor created many great students. Be a good mentor likened as a leader in the team. Which a good team or needs a good mentor to guide them(I think, you should better make your sentences more well-organized. Thus, you have to specify your main idea then make your explanation and example) . Likeas claimed by Mrs. Margaret Heffernan ever saidthat: "a good team, they had three ...
It related to the ways to be a good mentor.therefore, There are some steps, as, approach each mentor ship differently, set expectations together inwith the very beginning, take ...
Hiii ,. here my suggestion for your text.
.....set expectations together in the very beginning.... = Redundant (If it is possible, you should try to avoid redundant expression, because it adds no extra meaning on phrase.)
Which A good team or needshas a good mentor towho can guide them properly
Margaret Heffernan ever(use "ever" only in negative and Q sentence) said that: "a good team, they ... = >
Margaret Heffernan said "A good team had three characteristics such as showing the social sensitivity to each other, having equal time and having more women in team.
You have to organize your text and make sure that the flow of your thoughts are easy to follow.
Sincerly,
Abu Gosok
