Television is Challenging Hollywood

Television is Challenging Hollywood

For years, watching Hollywood was supposed lower. Even though, things begin to change. At the moment, it is praised for its smart writing and talented actor. Television appears depend on well-crafted characters than well-known actors. Many people assumed The Sopranos is the biggest TV series in 1990. This series told about the life of the Italian-American mobster. In addition, some people are fans of Frank Darabond The Walking Dead, this is about gore and zombies. People tried to stay alive and stay with human in harmful world. On the other hand, the popular drama is Breaking Bad. It is about a chemistry teacher who has cancer and selling a medicine to pay his medical bills. Walter White was the main character. This movie won wide range of awards. These are several television appears which are challenging Hollywood. Only 90 minutes cannot be done to the movie.

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(At the moment),(at the time) it is praised for its smart writing ...

according to my grammer book "at the moment" is used in present tense and "at the time" is used in past tense.

Hi Miss Maliha.

I have read your summary closely. Honestly, there was a large number of improvement you need. That is so messy. I could not get the point what you meant because you did not build your sentences systematically. You are supposed to harness linking words appropriately to make your flow better. I was confused to understand your sentences because you move from a topic another topic without the transitive words. I had to jump to the other topic without seeing signs. Sometimes I had to reread or pause to obtain the essential points and logic flow you gave. Please, you control your topic so that you can keep coherence and cohesion of your summary. Turning to the grammar, you have been confused about using conjunctions. Actually, there was the linking word, but you presented the conjunction. Besides that, you still fall in the mistakes of verb agreement.


That should be consistent to use the present tense.

Please, you review my notes to diminish your fault.
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hai andi
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please put your attention in conjunction since it is rarely.


over following years, Hollywood movie should take a lower price, even though it will change as time goes on


television will appear when it comes to well-crafted characters than well-known actors


there are several televisions appear which are challenging Hollywood

thanks