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Termination of languages is worse that many people think - it needs more attention to save them


Ali55 1 / -  
May 4, 2015   #1
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


Basically, language is one of the most important ways which not only makes a relationship between different people, it also has been an effective manner to show culture heritage of each country to the others. But , unfortunately we have been seeing during these years termination of languages and it is worse that some people think it is not significant if we have only one common language to speak and I strongly believe that being sensitive to native languages and paying more attention to it has far positive affections .

Those who think it is not important losing languages have their own results from standpoints of economic, politic, and even cultural aspects. For example; they have mentioned that when we have a common language, we will not have to consider any extra budget for many related activities such as; education other languages as a second or third language, translation and other relevant things. In addition, all special people like; politicians, scientists, and the others will have an effective operation through having a common language. Indeed, using a unique language can be helpful in cultural exchange.

Certainly there are benefits by providing a common language. This, however, helps people to loss native identifications. Each language has its own effects which can be more impressive than other concerned aspects. Everybody knows that national language is a vital part of cultural heritage of each country. On the other hand, the majority of languages have series of common words that have same conception and as a result, it shows the importance of diversity of languages in enrichment of international culture.

After all, it seems that many old languages have been wasting these years and the worse is that some do not think about this tragedy .Although, it would be a serious warning to next generation and it needs more attention to save languages.

tangthidiepanh 2 / 3  
May 5, 2015   #2
Those who think it is not important losing languages.... => ....it is not important to lose languages...
Your essay is very good, I like it
IqbalThemi 44 / 46 13  
May 6, 2015   #3
Hi, guys, Overall, your idea in your essay is good. However, I have a few correction for your writing.

I think your introduction need to rework, it is bulky meaning and does not cover what the task wants.


Basically, language is one of the most important ways which not only makes a relationship between different people, it also has been an effective manner to show culture heritage of each country to the others. But , unfortunately we have been seeing during these years termination of languages and it is worse that some people think it is not significant if we have only one common language to speak and I strongly believe that being sensitive to native languages and paying more attention to it has far positive affections .

Let's me try:
Language plays a important role in people's live. However, modern life makes that some languages die out. As such, some people think it is better for people just using a few language in conversing with others as it ensures people to understand each others. Therefore, I would argue that people just need fewer languages in the world to anticipate miss-understanding of communication.
thutyedaniel 32 / 38 17  
May 7, 2015   #4
Hi @ali55

After all , it seems that many old languages have been wasting these years and the worse is that some do not think about this tragedy.

After allbetter if you use "to sum up, to conclude" , it seems that many old languages have been wasting these years and the worse is that some do not think about this tragedy.

note: put space in your writing


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