Hi Byron
In 13th century Metamorphosis and Identity, Caroline Bynum explores anxieties about the idea of hybridity and metamorphosis in the conversion of personal, subject and spatiotemporal identity.
I'm lost, three words- anxieties, hybridity, and spatiotemporal. not sure how to make sense of them together I guess. what are anxieties? doubts? and by explore, I'm assuming she thoroughly discusses the topic. that makes sense. and what do you mean by conversion of... as in changes in? Is 'hybridity' something that Ms. Bynum uses?
Hybridity is that an individual can be 2 competing identities, co-existing in 2 different worlds, and the individual who transforms into another individual, performs metamorphosis.
Ok, so this makes it clearer; yet the sentence structure needs fixing.
Individuals display "hybridity" with their dual, antagonistic identities that coexist within two different worlds (does the person or does the identity co-exist in two worlds?), and individuals who transform (what do you mean? that his/her character changes/) from one to the other undergo? metamorphosis. I'm not sure if this is clearer or just bs...From what I understand, that's a somewhat better statement.
Both of these ideas go against the natural order when it defies what God had intended.
Is this according to Bynum?
The 16th century nonfictional story of Arnaud du Tilh, also known as Pansette, in The Return of Martin Guerre employs the ideas of hybridity and metamorphosis in its focus on the positive concept of Early Modern self fashioning.
So Arnaud is the character, but if you don't use Pansette (the aka?) don't use it here. You plop A LOT of the plot here. Who wrote this story? author/writer? And I'm not quite sure what Early Modern self fashioning is here. What do you mean? what IS self fashioning? also, you use those two terms a bit too much?-hybridity/metamorph.
Er...Reading through the rest, there's a lot of plot? I'm not sure what the prompt was, but most likely focus more just on the necessary parts in the intro, defining the terms you used, and talking more about the character later.
gtg :<
Good luck~