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"Every thing is alive because of water"; Clean Water ESSAY


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Apr 12, 2013   #1
Hey everyone! I'm new to this website, and I need help with my essay which is about one of the most important sources of life, clean water. Please tell your opinion about it.

"Every thing is alive because of water" a quotation mentioned in the Holy Quran. Water is an important source for all creature; it is as essential as air and sunlight. If a creature is deprived of water for more than 24 hours, it is going to die. Water, especially clean, is needed for humans and planets. Human and plants can't live without clean water while it doesn't matter whether the water is clean or not to animals. Human needs clean water to clean their equipment and to drink it and plants need it to stay alive.

I can't imagine how would life be with out clean water. We would be dirtier than animals. Our cloths would be used only once and then be thrown. We would smell so awful. Perfume wouldn't do any thing with the smell and it wouldn't be good itself. We wouldn't be able to eat food because it would be the same as the garbage. Dishes and pans would be suitable to make inside them. Everything would be sticky.

Can any one drink a gulp of sea or any open water? Of coarse, none can do it. If there hasn't been clean water, we wouldn't be exist because our parents would have died. Water is more essential to us than food. A person can stay alive without food for months, but he can't stay alive without water for more than 48 hours (2 days). Some people whom I knew were working on desert. Then they ran out water, but the radiator water and acid. Some of them couldn't bear their thirstiness and started to drink from radiator water and the acid which are fatal danger materials. As the help arrived, those who had drank from the radiator water and acid were dead, and the ones who didn't were on the verge of death.

Planets can't live without clean water. They got so weak when they are watered with salty water and die. Water that isn't clean my effect on what they produce. Unclean water brings germs that can kill a plant or affect on it.

To sum, air, clean water, sunlight ordered from much much to less important. With out those three source, we are on thing, so we must preserve to preserve the lives of us and coming generations.

dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Apr 13, 2013   #2
Water is an important source for all creatures

I prefer the word "living beings" to "creature" as it gives the impression that water is needed to sustain life;
Water is an important source for all living beings.

Humans and plants can't live without clean water while it doesn't matter whether the water is clean or not to animals.

Humans and plants cannot exist without clean water while the cleanliness is not a major issue for the animals.

Humans needs clean water to clean their equipment and to drink it and plants need it to stay alive.

Humans need clean water to drink and keep themselves clean. Plants need clean water for their survival.
temptprovidence 8 / 163 35  
Apr 14, 2013   #3
Water is an important source for all creature

....creatures

Water, especially clean, is needed for humans and plane ts.

I can't imagine how would life be with out clean water.

that is a single word...

We wouldn't be able to eat food because it would be the same as the garbage

Of coarse , none can do it.

course ... spelling error.

If there hasn't been clean water, we wouldn't be exist because our parents would have died.

...existing.

Plane ts can't live without clean water.

They got so weak when they are watered with salty water and die.

They gotcan get so weak when they are watered with salty water and can die.

Water that isn't clean ma y a ffect onto what they produce.


With out those three sourc e,

...sources.
mistakes are to be pondered .BEST OF LUCK:)


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