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Writing Task 1 - the most general things that people like and dislike about Fairmont Island


pikul 23 / 26 3  
Dec 2, 2015   #1
The pie charts show the most general things that people like and dislike about Fairmont Island based on observation of visitors. Overall, it be obviously seen that the highest proportion of general profit and general loss are the people and high cost of living respectively.

Move to more detailed analysis, the proportion under half of the total, people in Fairmont Island become the main reason of most common advantages among visitors which is 40%. It is the highest percentage of general advantages which means almost four times higher than good accomodation which has the lowest percentage. Then the scenery has 37% that make it as three times higher than culture proportion which becomes the second reason to encourage visitors come to this place. Culture and good accomodation only have a fairly similar percentage which are 12% and 11% respectively.

However, there are also drawback because of visiting Fairmont Island. Surprisingly, the quality of food becomes the lowest percentage that visitors dislike in this place with proportion at 5%. It means ninefold lower than high cost of living as the highest proportion. The percentage at around a third of total, entertaiment in this place get the second highest proportion with percentage at 30% and is followed by weather which has a gap of 10%. It makes entertaiment percentage higher than weather percentage as visitors claimed to dislike about this place.






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