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Three schedules of One News channel experienced unsteadiness between July and December


Anna94 47 / 56 3  
Nov 20, 2016   #1
A breakdown of the average daily viewing figures for channel One News over 12 month period is provided by the line graph. The measurement unit is in millions viewers per day. Overall, One News channel had the largest viewers at 6 pm in January. Surprisingly, displaying at 11 pm got popularity in August after it was opened four months ago.

Firstly, One News channel showed at 6 pm had the most viewers in the beginning than two others. Between January and June, showing at 6 pm fluctuated in which it hit at four in June after two times declined in March and May. Then, the channel displayed at 9.30 pm reached a peak at just under four in May then decreased gradually to three in June. On the other hand, 1 pm remained stable at around 1.5. Then, there was a new displayed channel at 11 pm in May, which climbed gradually.

Furthermore, three schedules of One News channel experienced unsteadiness from July to December whereas one schedule tended to stable, displaying at 1 pm. In August, showing at 11 pm hit popularity at four. While 9.30 pm and 6 pm decreased dramatically to one and three respectively. However, 11 pm saw a sharp fall to just under one in the end of the year, whereas others increased slightly after hit a high point in September. 226w

IvanMS027 43 / 56 9  
Nov 20, 2016   #2
Hi Anna. Here are my suggestions for you.

First of all, do not forget to place your graph here.

... daily viewing figures,measured in million viewers, for channel One News over ...

... increased slightly after hitting a high point in September.

However, you served the data well. try to change the "11pm" to "11pm news" to make it better, and give the 9.30pm news in august a state that "reached a bottom" or you can compare it with the peak of 11pm news.

Well done.
Goodluck and Keep Spirited.


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