i didnt catch the meaning of your last paragraph,could you explain it more.
"whats the main meaning of the subject?"
Here's what you said is the subject:
Subject:
Some people argue that government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they access to internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment.
If this is the subject, then your essay should focus on whether or not this is a good strategy for reducing unemployment.
You write:
Some more strong countries offer mobile and internet access to attract people to work and some poorer countries do this just by offering theme good going and returning facilities.
But, offering mobiles and internet access is not meant to
attract people to work. It's meant to help people who already
want to work to actually find job opportunities, contact potential employers, have a telephone number at which potential employers can reach them, etc., etc.