Today, the society's development makes children become more and more active. Many of them have a paid work although they are children, still less than 18 years old. While some people disagree with it, others are totally in favor
In some developed country like US or UK, there are many paid work for children. They are fostered to have a part-time job. Many students in Asia think that a part-time job is a convincing reason when they apply for a scholarship in US or UK.
In the first place, having a paid work can help them to improve their skills which are maybe useful for their future. Such as being a baby-sitter now is really suitable for anyone who wants to be a teacher in future. Even if your work now isn't associated with one in future, it's still a wonderful experience.
The second, having a paid work makes them understand how hard it's to earn money and they will use it more correctly. Moreover, when they are engaged in a paid job, it's sure that they become more and more independent. They don't need to ask their parents for money like they used to. In some countries, children who have a paid work can live their own life: have their apartment to stay, their money to spend. The earlier we start, the nearer we come to success. To parents whose children like that, they will be proud even thought they must be worry a lot. They worry about their children's jobs or being tired and what if their children spend money correctly or not.
To be engaged in a paid job isn't easy but it's very exciting. Whatever we think about those, they are just children. When agree with them to have a paid job, their parents have to make sure that they always keep an eye on them
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