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Topic: My favorite three ways of communications.


uzboy 9 / 29  
Mar 11, 2014   #1
In today`s world there are so many ways to use to communicate, all ways have enough advantages and disadvantages to change the way of mankind`s life. I would like to write crucial ways for me as clearly as possible.

Firstly, I would definitely choose mobile phones which are so easy to carry everywhere. Of course, I think everyone puts it onto the first level as it is very useful, and there are also messages, video calls and simple chats that you can form in it.

Secondly, there is something which has transformed our life: this is Internet. Everyone enjoys using emails and speaking through social web chats. The side which I do like is that we can share comments and photos about our life or everything we are interested in. I prefer more using especially Facebook, Gmail, Mailru and Odnoklassnikiru to another emails.

The last but not the least, this is face-to-face conversation. I completely believe that it is the most useful and interesting one in all ways. There should be natural situations and satisfaction in this talk that makes us feel happy or sad or ..., it also helps people to improve their oral behavior.

In conclusion, as we can see a lot of various communication ways have been invented in our world since even primitive tribe, therefore, we should be careful to choose them from our everyday experiences.

dumi 1 / 6,929 1592  
Mar 11, 2014   #2
What is the purpose of this writing? TOEFL? IELTS? You better mention the purpose so that others would be able to provide you with more task related feedbacks.

In today`s world there are so many ways to use to communicate, all these ways have enoughmany advantages andas well as disadvantages to change the way of mankind`s life.in terms of the way humans interact.
OP uzboy 9 / 29  
Mar 11, 2014   #3
Yes, you are right. Because I haven`t known rules yet. I singed today.
ahqaf - / 4  
Mar 12, 2014   #4
These three ways are really effective for communications.
dumi 1 / 6,929 1592  
Mar 14, 2014   #5
Secondly, there is something which has transformed our life: this is Internet.

.... transformed life to what? You need to specify!
Secondly, the Internet has been instrumental in transforming our lives into a more technologically advance platform.

I especially prefer more using especially Facebook, Gmail, Mailru and Odnoklassnikiru to another emails

The last but not the least, this is face-to-face conversation.

The third way of communication that I am interested in is the face to face communication.


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