Hi basawang,
Well... As a reader. I really want to know your reason after I finished reading your introduction. I am eager to know why you think job-hopping is better. But you just stopped.
Probably what you thought is right in other kinds of essay writings. But I don't think this is the way I should follow in an IELTS essay writing. Many thanks.
Your are half right. This is the example sentence I found from dictionary: I would advise people to think very carefully about committing themselves to working Sundays...
"to" should stay, you are right. :-)
I see. No wonder why. Thank you.
"Who" should not be deleted, otherwise you need to replace "transfer" with "transferring".
I see, let me work out it by checking my grammar book. Anyway many thanks.
cheers