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Topic: Think about the sources of nutritional information. Which sources do you trust the most? Why?


chibichan 2 / -  
Aug 11, 2015   #1
Topic: Think about the sources of nutritional information. Which sources do you trust the most? Why? (5-8 sentences)

Nutritionist is the source that I trust most. Nutritionist is a person who is an expert on the relationship between food and health. Therefore, they are trained to give advice about safe diet, based on the credible evidence. In addition, they are those who provide information and knowledge about nutrition for magazines, books, newspapers,...Therefore, we should hear from them directly instead of believing in media, which can report information in an incorrect way. In conclusion, I do trust in nutritionist rather than other sources of nutritional information.

P.S. Please help me check this paragraph. Are there any mistakes? Is it well-structured?
Thank you :3

BLisa - / 12 6  
Aug 11, 2015   #2
Hi chibichan,

Let me give some suggestions,

First of all, when you write paragraph, the first thing you should do is decide the controlling idea. Than begin the paragraph with a sentence that presents both the topic and the controlling idea.

Topic : sources of nutritional information

controlling idea : source for information nutrition vary

Topic sentence : Many reliable sources that provide information nutrition, such as newspaper, magazine, and nutritionist.

After make the topic sentence, you can 'enlarge' one by one the source of information, than choose one source which you trust most and explain it.

Happy writing ;)


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