of which economy, before their appearance, haven't blossmed yet.
- such areas when converted to tourist places can give a boost to the economy of that place.
Not until the investment of some companies do chains of hotels and services spring up
- Many companies such as chains of hotels and restaurants invest in tourist places
It will, by all means, attract considerable attention which goes hand in hand with the enormous income for the local residents. In other words
- This attracts considerable attention of tourists which further goes hand in hand with
tourism helps divert the local economy to its right direction, which exploit the best out of its own potential.
Therefore it is clear that tourism helps in the growth of economy which is beneficial for the local residents as well as the governments
Because of that, tourism should not be alledged to be notorous for its detriment to the ecological diversity.
It is felt that tourism should not be held responsible to be detrimental for the environment
teaching process is highly recommended in pursuit of a harmonial relationship between human and their surroundings
- In conclusion you should only summarise what you have already written in the body paragraphs. Teaching process does not make it clear what you want to state in conclusion
I have made some changes in a way I choose to write. I tend to use simple words and easily understandable language. I hope this helps