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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - transport and car use in Edmonton


phuong8593 1 / -  
Mar 17, 2014   #1
The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

People's reasons for using the car in city

Commute to work 55%
Shopping 15%
Leisure activities 15%
Taking children to school 40%
Business 45%

The pie chart shows the proportion of transports used in Edmonton and the table explains why people use car in the city.
In the pie chart, car is demonstrated to be the most popular vehicle used with 45 percent. The runner up is LRT (Light rail transit), which accounts for 35 percent. The last two types of transport that people usually use are bus and taxi.

While the pie chart gives general information about transport, the table indicates the details that what people use car in the city for. Most of people commute to work by car, with 55 percent. At a little but still a big proportion, people use car to taking children to school or to do business. Among all of 5 activities listed in the table, shopping and leisure activities are the least likely that people use car.

In gereral, car is still very important in Edmonton city despite of the rise of other methods of transport.


  • thi is the chart

dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Mar 17, 2014   #2
Follow this structure for this task;

You should open IELTS related threads in Writing Feedback forum. Also, have a more meaningful title for your essays.
Pahan 1 / 1,906 553  
Mar 20, 2014   #3
Follow dumi's suggestion for this task, :)

In the pie chart, car is demonstrated to be the most popular vehicle used with 45 percent. The runner up is LRT (Light rail transit), which accounts for 35 percent. The last two types of transport that people usually use are bus and taxi.

This task is to assess your report writing skills and therefore it is better if you adopt a more appropriate tone for report writing. :)
As per the pie chart, car had been the most popular vehicle used by 45% of the people. The LRT has recorded 35% usage.

While the pie chart gives general information about transport, the table indicates the details that what people use car in the city for.

I don't find a table in your image. Better you upload that too :(


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