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IELTS WRITING - Transportation of products and people cause the most pollution worldwide



bonguyen 2 / 1  
Dec 31, 2025   #1
Topic: Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution worldwide. Some people believe the government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent day, research has shown that the movement of goods and people are the major cause of pollution worldwide. A host of individuals subscribe to the notion that the government should adjust them, others assume that this is the mistake in each person. From my own stand point, I personally lean toward the latter.

On the one hand, there are several compelling justifications why people contend that the government need to take actions in alleviting pollution. Investing money on public transports such as bus, coach and bicycle as well as modern techniques in all public tranportation systems can more effective for this problem. In order to increase effectiveness, the government should organise promotion day, which encourages them to ultilize these means insteade of using private vehicles. Not only that but also opening the campaign programme to contact with all drivers and inspire them to the benefit of using public transports. As a result, they may change their thinking and raising awareness about the useful of public transport.

Notwithstanding the aforementioned positions, I opine that people should take more responsible for their actions about causing of pollution. Lots of people choose using private vehicles because of its convenience. They prefer driving without affecting to others and avoiding interact with strangers in public tranports. This makes government's strategies lack of effecient through people's opinion and preferences. Moreover, some individuals who are taxi driver or shipper, therefore they must moving and delivering across long distances with petrol and carbon emissions, which makes polluting become a serious problem.

In summary, although the government can resolve pollution by expanding public transports and opening campaign programme to attract drivers, I side with the viewpoint that people are the major factor leads to pollute
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 16060  
Jan 1, 2026   #2
I have a problem with reviewing this essay because the prompt that has been provided is confusing. It is as if there are 2 different prompt reasons, unrelated to the original topic, being provided for written analysis. Are you sure you have the right prompt for this essay? Kindly double check your information because I am unsure of the accuracy of the advice I am giving you.

Your prompt restatement is as confusing as the original prompt. I believe that this is because of your inability to use English vocabulary properly. If I were to judge your English speaking and writing abilities, if I were to consider your grammar usage level, I would rate you as a novice or a beginner. Your sentence building abilities are not good enough to achieve a passing score in the GRA section. You will receive the lowest possible scores in the LR and Cc sections of the scoring rubic. While I sense you desire to make yourself understood, your English language skills are not strong enough to warrant a base passing score at the moment. I urge you to strengthen your vocabulary and grammar skills if you want to pass this test in the future.


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