I am pleased to read your writing since you have shown the great progress. I have got the points of your summary. However, I will give you a few suggestion to develop the quality of this writing.
... Simard highlights about how t
ress TREES talk each other. Suzanne investigated A forest over 30 years. She conducted a research about AN interaction of each tree in THE Canadian forest. She used HARNESSED two isotopes (...) there was two-wayS communication going ...
... had been injected gases
before PREVIOUSLY had same sounds whether ... Different result reveled REVEALED from THE replica trees.
... plants was not connected into TO the other exposed gases plants.
Note: Please, you avoid the repetitive word.
I am looking forward to meeting your writing again.
Overall, it's a good job.
Hi , maybe i'd like to give a try to give some suggestion.
Suzanne has investigated forest for over than 30 years.
... plastic bags for her experimental trees and then (...) for controlling method she used a replica without exposed any gases.
Different result reveled from the replica
treesones . She did not find any sounds andtherefore she suggested those plants was not ...
and i suggest you to create sentence more effectively, for example " Suzanne, who has investigated forest for over than 30 years, used unique way ...."