It is true that
The writer is making a general statement a fact. A piece of writing that is unnecessary since such a statement does not exist and is not being asked within the original presentation. Such a statement will not increase the scoring consideration. Avoid making unfounded statements in the restatement in the future.
In the following essay, both these ideas will be discussed
The essay has automatically failed at this point. The opinion statement or discussion response is not in line with the discussion requirement. The writer has altered the discussion approach so much, it is no longer connected to the original presentation.
TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?
In the following essay, both these ideas will be discussed.
While some scores will be applied to the L R and G R A sections, as these are general score considerations, it will not be enough to gain a passing score. Why? The main scoring aspects in relation to logic and comprehension, namely the TA and C + C sections, as based on the original direction, have failed in the presentation.