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Truth is most important factor in making a romantic relationship persistent


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Oct 20, 2013   #1
It has been debatable for many years whether telling the truth is the foremost important consideration in any kinds of relationship among people or not. Consequently, it needs to be discussed carefully. Some people agree with the statement; however, others disagree with the premise argued by the author. I myself believe that it depends on the situation as described below.

To begin with, telling the truth is the most important factor in making a romantic relationship persistent between a man and a woman who want to get along with each other. In other words, telling the truth is one of the best ways to conquer the heart of loved ones. For example, I have had a girl friend since I was an undergraduate student, about for eight years. During this long time, we never lied to each other, and we still love each other in spite of facing lots of problems. I strongly believe that it happened just because never did we lie together. This is why I believe that telling the truth is the most important consideration in romantic relationships between people.

On the other hand, the statement, telling the truth, is not always the critical consideration in any relationship between people. For example, I do not agree to tell the truth about your personal life or things like that to your coworker at the first day you meet him or her, because you do not know him or her well. As another example, you might did something wrong, a minor mistake not a big one, when you were a teen. Telling your story, even if it is a truth, to your job interviewers would kill your chance for obtaining the job position that you have been looking for in a long time. This example clarifies that why I believe that telling the truth is not always the best option.

To sum it up, the author argues that people should tell the truth in all situations as it is the most important consideration in any kinds of relationship among people. I partly agree with the author; however, I think that making a decision to tell or not to tell the truth fundamentally depends on the situation. We should always tell the truth in our romantic relationships, while it is not necessarily to tell the truth for other types of relationships, like relationships we may have in our workplace.

vangiespen - / 4,137 1449  
Sep 12, 2014   #2
It has been debatable for many years whether telling the truth is the foremost important consideration in any kinds of relationship among people or not. Consequently, it needs to be discussed carefully. Some people agree with the statement; however, others disagree with the premise argued by the author. I myself believe that it depends on the situation as described below.

- The debate about whether telling the truth is an important factor in any kind of relationship has been going on for decades now. That is why this needs to be discussed carefully and in great detail. While some people agree with this statement, others disagree just like the author. I believe that telling the truth depends upon the situation of the relationship.

- This is a very short introduction that does not have an effective hook to interest the reader. I suggest that you improve upon this statement and provide a stronger thesis statement other than describing a situation below.

To begin with, telling the truth is the most important factor in making a romantic relationship persistent between a man and a woman who want to get alongwith each other . In other words, telling the truth is one of the best ways to conquer the heart of loved ones. For example, I have had a girl friend since I was an undergraduate student, about for eight years . During this long time, we never lied to each other, and we still love each other in spite of facing lots of problems. I strongly believe that it happened just because never did we lie together . This is why I believe that telling the truth is the most important consideration in romantic relationships between people .

- Telling the truth is an important factor... making a romantic relationship work ... Telling the truth is one of the ... For example, I had a girlfriend during my undergraduate years. We were together for 8 years... we still loved each other despite facing... it happened because we never lied to each other .

- This is a good start to your body of paragraphs. You can develop your personal story a bit more in order to strengthen you belief about not telling lies to one another.

On the other hand, the statement, telling the truth, is not always the critical consideration in any relationship between people. For example, I do not agrees{] to tell the truth about your personal life or things like that to your coworker at the first day you meet him or her, because you do not know him or her well. As another example, you might did something wrong, a minor mistake not a big one, when you were a teen. Telling your story, even if it is a truth, to your job interviewers would kill your chance for obtaining the job position that you have been looking for in a long time. This example clarifies that why I believe that telling the truth is not always the best option.

- ... telling the truth is not always a critical... I do not agree that telling the truth about... to your co-worker on the first day... you might have done something wrong,... even if it is the truth... This example strengthens the reason why ...

To sum it up, the author argues that people should tell the truth in all situations as it is the most important consideration in any kinds of relationship among people. I partly agree with the author; however, I think that making a decision to tell or not to tell the truth fundamentally depends on the situation. We should always tell the truth in our romantic relationships, while it is not necessarily to tell the truth for other types of relationships, like relationships we may have in our workplace.

- You need to revise your conclusion. You cannot state new information in a conclusion. This should be another paragraph instead. Write a new conclusion then we will deal with the grammar problems in this paragraph.


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