The truth is sometimes caustic and unpleasant to hear, although very important for us

Important truths begin as outrageous, or at least uncomfortable, attacks upon the accepted wisdom of the time.

the painful truth

As a human being, we have a tendency to avoid truth because most of the time truth is appalling and it has a history attacking the accepted wisdom. Truth as it seems so simple but it has a deep and convoluted meaning hidden in it. Truth is never mollifying, it always causes a deep turmoil in an individual. As time passes, an individual unravels more about truth and it gets acerbic with time.

To illustrate let us look at an example, there are many famous theories on the existence of nasal lines. These are the lines which can only be seen from universe and it was made 2000 years ago. There is this one famous theory which claims that these lines was developed by aliens so that they can see these lines from universe and land there. As we go deep in these theories we will unravel bit by bit small truth about these line and which is outrageous and not comforting.

As a human being, we have a predilection to not hear acerbic truth, because it make us uncomfortable. We try to escape from the truth and when we confront them in future it is pretty obvious we will be outrageous.

In addition, important truth is not always outrageous and attacks upon the accepted wisdom. Sometime, they support the experience and make us feel good about the truth.

In conclusion, most of the time truth is caustic and unpleasant to hear, but it is important, for our development, to have better understanding of right conscience of right and wrong. Escaping from truth is inevitable and one should not avoid truth just for his comfort, no matter how much uncomfortable truth is one must accept it.

Bharti, I am not sure of the purpose of this written work. Are you responding to an IELTS or TOEFL prompt? Or are you just writing for the sake of practicing your writing skills in English. If the latter is the case, then I have to tell you that your writing is highly emotional and descriptive. However, if you mean this essay for a non-professional reader, then your line of reasoning will not be easily understood and, due to the depth of the example that you chose, may end up boring the average reader. Keep in mind that your writing must be easily understood by the average reader. Unless, you are writing for a professional journal or something similar. You also have a problem with your punctuation. You lack commas to indicate pauses in certain instances when it was necessary. You have hanging paragraphs that contain only 2 sentences. Having only 2 sentences does not help to strengthen your discussion. In an academically written paper, you need to write at least 5 sentences in order to create a coherent paragraph. You cannot expect to fully explain your intent in only 2 sentences. You also need to use more connecting words such as "a" and "the" in your essays. The lack of these connecting words make your written work difficult to read. The essay is interesting in terms of topic and your presentation. However, your presentation can use some improvements. Good effort though. Keep practicing.

@Holt
Hi, I'm preparing for a GRE AWA section. This is in respond to the GRE Issue section. Clearly, i need to work hard on my writing skills. Can you please suggests some site from where i can learn more about rules for using punctuation ?

Thank you for evaluating my issue..!!