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Two pictures - remarkable changes to Foster Road


syamsiahRahim 9 / 15 3  
May 1, 2017   #1
The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road.
Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.


many alterations on the road as a result of its reconstruction



The diagrams give information about the proposal to change Foster Road between SE 84th and 85th avenue road before and after installation. Overall, it is interesting to notice that there will many alterations in Foster road after it reconstruction and the remarkable changes is provided trees along both of street side.

At the beginning, before installation the street has a wide lanes car where two cars can run out consecutive in one direction. Furthermore, the side of street has just used for electricity installation.

Moving to the second picture after installation, it can be seen that the lanes for car will be reduced and the both of side will become bicycle lanes. Moreover, in the end of the street will be provided new crossing for pedestrian near from gas station, in the middle of it will consist of traffic light. Likewise, planting trees will be provided in along both sides of the street.




agus_mono 13 / 23 2  
May 1, 2017   #2
hay @syamsiahRahimmanca,
there are several advice that can help you in finishing this essay. i know well the difficulties of this questions because there are a few changes and we have to make at least 150-word essay. You have to focus on detail change of the maps.

these are several mistakes you did on this essay:
... information about the proposed change Foster Road ...

both of side : both sides of the road
the side of street is just used for ...


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