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'Types of news: Local, national and international' - news and types essay


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My assignment is answer this question
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Does entertainment news fit into these? How?
Can local events gain national and international notoriety?
Classification paragraph
Types of news: Local, national and international

In reality people look for news, information about economy, weather, social, politics and crime just to name a few examples. In general, news falls into three different categories: local, national and international. Many people watch local news as part of daily routine. Local news provide a sense of information regarding what happens in your city, county or state which can be useful to any individual who needs up-to-date coverage and events. For example, a recently shooting around your neighborhood can cause major significant around the country. On the other hand, national news is your source for the most breaking news in the whole country you live in. It is the major source for entertainment, sport, health, and political issues. For example, the presidential candidate campaign including analysis and opinion for the economist of the country. Finally, international news is standard for global information. This news will inform and determine what happened around the world. For example, in entertainment a new artist is promoting a new album by touring in different countries. Clearly, local news will be the most watch news in any home due to its up-to-date information in one's local area which tends to be the major concern to any individual.

In general, news falls into three different categories: local, national and international.

Local news provide a sense of information regarding what happens in your city, county or state which can be useful to any individual who needs up-to-date coverage and events. to keep himself updated with things happening around him.

For example, a recently shooting around in your neighborhood can cause a major significant panic in your around the country. In such event, the local broadcasting would play a great role in enabling the countrymen to learn about the latest development of that scene.

On the other hand, national news is your source for the most breaking news in the whole country you live in.---------------- I wish you move this sentence before the previous one. However, it needs to be improved since your idea isn't clearly expressed. I suggest;

Local news is the main source that people depend to learn about latest breaking news happening every nook and corner of the country. (then give the example)
This is what I suggested;

Local news provide information regarding on the happenings what happens in your city, county or state or country state which can be useful to any individual who needs up-to-date coverage and events. to keep himself updated with things happening around him. Further,the local news serve as the main source that people depend on to learn about latest news happening every nook and corner of the country.For example, a recent shooting in your neighborhood can cause a major significant panic in your country. In such event, the local broadcasting would play a great role in enabling the countrymen to learn about the latest development of that scene.
Apr 13, 2012   #5
Hi, in general your writing is good and you could convey the message in the effective and short sentences. I have some suggestions that have been written below:
First of all, you tried to support your ideas by some examples. But the term "For example" was used for several times. It would be better to use various terms such as:for instance, For the cases such as..., to give an example, e.g. ,...
at line 1: in my view the use of word "seek" is better than "look for". (That is just a suggestion)
"Falls into..." : You can use this sentence: "The news are classified into three main categories"
Last line: "in one's local area..": I think it would be more effective if you use the term " specific area"
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