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IELTS writing task 2, University education should be free for everyone


masako 1 / 1  
Nov 14, 2017   #1
In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

education in universities without tuition fees?



Fees for higher education are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some university should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree completely with the notion that university education ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individuals and society.

A good reason to abolish university fees is that it gives people equal rights whether they are rich or poor. At present, students from a poor background are prevented from entering university because they are unable to afford the fees. This situation, which can be avoided by eliminating tuition fees, excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminatory.

Moreover, having fees at university means that students will no longer have to work at the same time as studying to cover their costs. For example, a recent survey conducted by Princeton University, which took place in many countries, found that around three-quarters of all university students in the world have to work either full-time or part-time while studying at university to pay their fees. Free higher education should, therefore, produce better results as students will be able to afford to apply themselves to their studies exclusively.

Finally, free university education will benefit society in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up higher education to a wider section of the population. This will result in increasing the number of educated people. In other words, having a greater resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to society as a whole. Furthermore, it can bring more economic advantages to a country that shows itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields.

To conclude, free university education is essential for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance. The cost of free education will be recouped many times over by the benefit it brings.

chinkybehl22 10 / 25 4  
Nov 14, 2017   #2
Though I am not an expert, as per me the introduction should first have a background before jumping to the real topic.

Nowadays, a hefty amount of tuition fees are required to be paid by the students to study in the universities. Some believe that the fees for higher education should be waived off as it is unaffordable for everyone. I completely agree, that not charging people for education could become very beneficial for a country and its economy.

Hope this helps!!!
naseernasrati 14 / 33 10  
Nov 14, 2017   #3
Hi
overall i would like to write you a brief description of a good and academic essay guide, which you can follow that and get a high score.

try to choose predicted essays style.
at the first start from stating a general topic or making question of the prompt and then use a transition and then write your opinion, all these at the first paragraph as your introduction paragraph. in predicted style you should state three important points which in the three body paragraph you should write about each of them in detail.

in the second step go on the first body paragraph by choosing the first important point from introduction paragraph.
the next two paragraphs should be the same as your first paragraph according to its type.
and then write your conclusion.
keep in your mind to write the body paragraphs as this instruction:
first of each body paragraph should be a topic sentence
next, write your reasons and examples
finally at the end of each body paragraph write a cause and effect sentence.

if you follow this instructions correctly and completely you will receive a high score
good luck.


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