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University education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree?


truongnhunhan 3 / 2  
May 21, 2013   #1
TOPIC: A university education is necessary for success in today's world. Agree or disagree?
I agree that university education is important for success in today's world.There are some several reasons.The first reason is studying in university gives you experiences, which might helps you a lot in your future job.If you doesn't study in university you might fell nervous in the job and you may not success.Also, studying in university will gives you a lot of knowledge you need for your future job which makes you easy to success in today's world. In conclusion,university education is very important for your success in the future.

nguyenngoc 4 / 8  
May 21, 2013   #2
If you doesn't study in university

> if you don't study at university
i think this sentence has some troubles, you should change to '' without studying at university students will lack of a number of academic knowledge to support for professional occupation in their future.

( this is just my opinion)
dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
May 21, 2013   #3
I agree that university education is important for success in today's world

I guess you are preparing for TOEFL or IELTS If so, don't answer the prompt directly because they expect you to present your answer in an essay style.
LAB 328 3 / 7  
May 22, 2013   #4
i agree with dumi, your essay is too short and it has to follow a general structure.

moreover there are some grammatical errors :
, which might help you a lot in your future job.If you don't study in university you might feel nervous in the job and you may not succeed.Also, studying in university will give you a lot of knowledge you need for your future job which makes it easy for you to succeed in today's world.
duchuy1809 1 / 2  
Jun 13, 2013   #5
your introductory should be longer and more informative
chrisredfii 1 / 1  
Jun 13, 2013   #6
Your essay should be longer.


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