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University student should stay away from their parents in most country; Agree or Disagree?


KARNIK 1 / -  
Mar 3, 2014   #1
It is seem that while studying, university student stay away from their parents in most country.
Some people think it is good for the student.
Do you agree or disagree.

At present time, higher qualification is more essential for all students who want to achieved highest pick of success. so, students sacrificed to leaved the parents as well as social life. But , end of the study its beneficial for students.

The university offered various types of courses for scholar student in which selection process is too complicated like medical line , engineering line. therefore, students who joined their favourite courses with suffered from friends and parents. In this period they have mentally strong although , they managed time to study and money which spent by parents and also pupils have fill fearless moreover, they make good friends in hostel life. Therefore, toddlers have well matured and handle all the situation in any kind of problem in hall life.

However, students diverted some bad habits and also joined dirty pertinent which can be possible to spoil their carrier like having smoking, tobacco chewing, drugs etc., it is seen that some junior scholar faced scholar so, its highly stressful for all junior and some hostel cannot be provided hygienic food and clean room. So, it is bad for health. Lastly, parents suffered from all thinks like money and carrier of their naughty child.

In the conclusion, students studied from hostel or pain guest is highly negative effect to their study and life style thus, I personally believed that candidate should be joined boarding school or university to unexpected circumstances which faced parents and students.

eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,195 459  
Mar 3, 2014   #2
Is this for IELTS or TOEFL? Then study samples from its essays. This will make you familiar to the writing style.

students studied from hostel or pain guest isare highly negative effect to their study and life style thus, . As a result, I personally believed that candidateS should be joined boarding school or university to unexpected circumstances which faced parents and students.

However, students diverted some bad habits and also joined dirty pertinent which can be possible to spoil their carrier like having smoking, tobacco chewing, drugs etc., it is seen that some junior scholar faced scholar so, its highly stressful for all junior and some hostel cannot be provided hygienic food and clean room. So, it is bad for health. Lastly, parents suffered from all thinks like money and carrier of their naughty child.

You'd better show one-two examples from this paragraph.
dumi 1 / 6,928 1592  
Mar 4, 2014   #3
It is good to include your purpose (TOEFL, IELTS, GRE etc.) in the title itself so that others would provide you with more task related feedbackse. Also, you should have opened this essay in the Writing Feedback forum which is the most appropriate forum for this essay.

who want to achieved

.... "who want to achieve" is the right grammar form.


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