In fact, by investing in a business we will annually ripe interests that can be reinvest in the same company or by buying shares from other companies.
... annually ripe interests? ... that sounds a bit awkward :( Do you mean that you can reinvest the profits you earn from business?
Moreover our recent decade is rife with narrative about people you start from light financial resources but has become billionaires by making smart investment.
...this is another confusing sentence.... Write shorter sentences with simple vocabulary that you are more confident with. If you have inappropriate words, they can confuse the reader by giving a very different meaning to what you write.
Another good point for purchasing a company is that this makes people feel more independent and responsible.
Another good point about purchasing a company is that it makes people feel more responsible as well as independent.In conclusion I strongly believe that a profitable way of making use of our financial resources is by purchasing a business.
In conclusion, I believe that purchasing a business brings more benefit to a person than purchasing a house. .... this is a very simple sentence, but a lot more clearer and interesting to read than complicated stuff.... In writing, what is more important is to keep the reader alive through what you write.