Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of vegetarianism and come to a conclusion.
Over the years, the number of vegetarians around the globe has dramatically increased, becoming not only a simple present-day fashion, but also a healthier lifestyle. While most people agree that many diseases can be avoided by adopting a healthy diet, opponents claim that there is nothing more fulfilling than a tasty meal.52
It goes without saying that vegetarianism equals health. It has been proven that fruits and vegetables are full of proteins, iron, calcium, omega 3 and Vitamin B12 that cannot be found in animal products, which are most of the time high in fat and calories. The advantages are extraordinary: vegetarianism prevents cancer by 50%, prevents heart disease, lowering blood pressure, gallstones, kidney stones, osteoporosis and incredibly, reverse diabetes. It makes people physically healthier and improves psychiatric health. 77
In contrast, it must be admitted that vegetarians' meals are not as tasty as normal people's are. What can be tastier than a large bar of delicious chocolate? Children cannot resist it, nor can grown-ups. Steak, chicken soup, pancakes with hazelnut or Mars and Snickers bars are products that one cannot just pass by them, without feeling his mouth wet and having pangs in his stomach. Humans are made to eat and follow their basic instinct and if this instinct is to eat, then nothing can stop it. 88
All things being said, it can be concluded that vegetarianism is a healthier lifestyle, but not many people chose to abstain from eating their favorite candy or stake just to avoid cancer or heart attacks. 35
becoming not only a simple present-day fashion, but also a healthier lifestyle
.... this sounds a bit confusing. " simple present-day fasion" ? looks like it doesn't come right :(
While most people agree that many diseases can be avoided by adopting a healthy diet, opponents claim that there is nothing more fulfilling than a tasty meal.
... You are going out of the topic here.... healthy diet does not mean it should be veg. It can be a non veg meal, but still a well balanced diet. Also the logic here doesn't seem to be convincing. Try and keep your alignment with the topic always.
