well, it has already become a popular topic :)
lol, I played a lot, that's why i support the positives ^_^
Well, you support the view that video games have more benefits for kids than negatives. So, it is better you defend this position in your body paras. In the above para you talk about the other side which really does not help you defend your position on the issue.
thank you for the advice dumi. Actually, I am afraid it is much harder to organize only one side (positives or negatives) because of the time constraint. It is much easier to write a both side structure within a pice of very limited time.
Body para1: On the one hand, + topic sentence. Firstly... Secondly... Finally... (three points about positive views)
Body para2: On the other hand, + topic sentence. Firstly...Secondly...Finally...(three points about negative views)
It is very difficult to give 6 negative views at the same time.
The problem is that in which way we should write the introduction para, the conclusion para and topic sentences to rationalize the above structure even if the question asked clearly about "what is your opinion?" Could you give me some advices plz. I really need help here !