Asma Raj 6 / 10 Sep 17, 2016 #1Susan Cain as a lawyer and consultant presents both about extraverted and introverted people in society which has several differences in character whether in the school or in the workplace. At least one-third of the human are introverts and they have given huge contribution in social life even though some of those are underestimated by community. Eleanor Roosevelt, for instance, is commonly held as an example of a highly successful introvert person who gave a huge number of press conferences and she was also a United Nations delegate, a human rights activist, a teacher, and a lecture. On the other hand, extraverted people prefer to focus on the world outside the self in which they enjoy social interactions and are likely to be enthusiastic, verbal, and assertive. In short, it is fairly difficult to find a person with a strictly singular characteristic. Many individuals may be either introverts or extroverts, but generally a mix of both types of characteristics is found in a person.
fadhilmd25 41 / 75 11 Sep 17, 2016 #2Dear Asma, here are some advices for you, feel free to correct meSusan Cain who works as a lawyer andas well as consultantAt least one-third of the human --> you can give a detail about it, such as one third of the human in the world or somethingis commonly held became as an examplehope it helps you to improve your writing,Regards
wew018 - / 20 9 Sep 17, 2016 #3Hi @Asma RajYou have a good writing style. Though, there are some minor lapses in your essay.Susan Cainas,a lawyer andaconsultant,presents ...informationbothabout extraverted and introverted people ...huge contributionsand a lecturerthe selftheminaeachperson .That will be all. Keep writing
