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The viewership rate of the news Channel one


Beauty17 56 / 88 5  
Nov 19, 2016   #1
Writing Task 1 Channel one news viewing figures

A comparison of the number of channel one news viewers according to the show times between January and December measured in millions per day is shown in the line chart. Overall, most of people watched channel one news everyday at 6:00 p.m while the number of viewers at 1:00 p.m remained constant during this period.

It can be seen that the figure for people who watched at 1:00 p.m stood at 1.3 in January. In this category, there was no considerable change until December. In contrast, a very small number of people started to watch at 11:00 p.m in May. It witnessed a dramatic increase by 3.5 in July than reached its peak at 4.1 in August. After that, it dropped monthly until December.

People who watched at 6:00 p.m were declining over the time although there were some fluctuations. It raised the bottomed at 3.2 millions in December. However, the total number of viewers at 9:30 p.m is lower than at 6:00 p.m. The highest number of people watched at 9:30 p.m is 3.8 millions in May while the lowest at 1 million in August.




fitrianikembar 1 / 1  
Nov 19, 2016   #2
@Beauty17

If in the chart does not show the exactly number, it will be better if you use "approximately/about/almost/nearly, etc.
nurainiyusuf16 47 / 83 6  
Nov 19, 2016   #3
Hello Beauty!
Allow me to give you some suggestion.

It can be seen that, the figure for people ...
It dipped to 3.2 millions in December.

... number of viewers at 9:30 p.m was lower than at 6:00 p.m.
... watched at 9:30 p.m was 3.8 millions ...
PAST TENSE

Hope it helps you :)
ReskiRamadani88 43 / 57 5  
Nov 19, 2016   #4
... in millions per day. It is shown in ...

Check your comma (,) or point (.) using
It can be seen that(,) the figure ...

... over the time although (,) there were ...

... viewers at 9:30 p.m is(was) lower than ...


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