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Watching and Visiting Methods that are Used to Learn About Country


Aboard traveling is the most famous journey recently. Many people take on their view that learning of the other culture of each country is unique experience that not the all of people can get it. Watching is easy method that to get more information about the another country in the other places, and also there is different way to know anythings about the country that called is visiting the place.

Firstly, the method that needs low cost, easy to do, and has flexible time doing it by are watching television programs, films, or videos. Nowdays, the programs give more information about anythings, mainly the life of other of countries, such as culture, food, destination, or education. This choice only need low cost because we just watch it in house, park, or wherever and whenever that we can do it. Also, many devices which support to get more information about other countries only by watching, such as our handphone that has many features particularly youtube. We just type the keyword of our information of country that we need and finally we can get much informations about it.

Secondly, the another way to learn about the country is actually visiting this place. The traveling option make certain learning for everyone who study a real situation of the state. We can see and enjoy the situation or building evidently. Also, we may make interaction with local inhabitants and learn the culture of life or education too.

In my view, the conclusion is watching that easy and flexible method to learn about the country, but the visiting method is too important thing that can use to get more information about the country on visual sense and maybe unavailable in programs on television, video, or film.

Hallo yurike.. i want to give some suggestions toward your essay..

First of all, you need put your question. If you did not put it you just make people or reader confuse.. so be carefull..

Now lets continue to the content..

Aboard traveling is the most ...
... learning of the other culture of each country (...) that not the all of people can get it. Watching is easy method that to get more information about the another country (...) also there is different way to know anythings about the country that called is visiting the place.


1. ABROAD TRAVELLING -> TRAVELLING ABROAD
ABROAD IS ADVERB SO IT MUST PUT BEHIND

2. OTHER CULTURES (OTHER MUST BE FOLLOWED BY PLURAL IF ANOTHER SINGULAR)

3. DO NOT USE ARTICLE THE IN MANY VERBS YOU MUST MINIMALIZE IT

4.WATCHING IS EASY METHOD TO GET (YOU DO NOT NEED PUT THE CONJUCTION THAT BECAUSE GET IS VERB INFINITIVE)

5. DIFFERENT WAY -> DIFFERENT WAYS

6.ANYTHINGS -> EVERYTHING (ANY CAN BE USED ONLY IN NEGATIVE OR QUESTION FORM)
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