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The way of people dressing is not the most important aspect


ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Sep 6, 2016   #1
Some people say that the clothes people wear are the most important indication of what they are like. Others, however, say that people should not be judged by the clothes they wear. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people assume that someone who dresses well is a good person and another one who wears unpleasant clothes is a bad one. Meanwhile, others think that judging somebody by their appearance is not fair. In my opinion, having good looking may create a respectable assumption but it is not the most important thing that shows the real personality of an individual.

In a common way, people choose what they wear based on their fashion style and their certain purposes. For instance, teenagers usually have unique dressing style and more likely to wear many kinds of clothes with bright colour. In other side, most adults are more willing to wear casual and elegant ones. Another example, someone who works in formal sector like a teacher, an economist or a lawyer is prone to wear smart dress while others who have job as celebrities are dressing in luxury fashions. Therefore, in these ways clothes may indicate personal backgrounds but do not reveal their personality.

On the other hand, personal behaviour and attitude should be more essential to know what kind of person someone exactly is. A good man should have good behaviour such as polite, responsible, humble, easy going, open minded, and so on. The preserve, a bad guy are supposed to be a person who speaks rudely, arrogant, petulant, and having others bad attitudes. Sometimes, even though someone dresses smartly, it is not a guaranty that they have good attitudes. Also when a person wears unpleasant clothes, it does not mean he is a bad individual.

In conclusion, the way of people dressing is not the most important aspect to point out their true characteristic. Other essential things to know the personality of someone are their daily behaviour and attitudes.

justivy03 - / 2,367 607  
Sep 7, 2016   #2
Hi Eka, here's my take on the last two paragraphs of your essay.

- A good man should have a good behavior
- The preserve, a bad guy are supposed to be a person who speaks rudely, ... - this sentence is quiet confusing, what exactly do you mean?

- it is not a guarantyguarantee that they
- havepossess a good attitudes .
- Also, (don't forget your punctuation marks ) when
- a person wears unpleasanttacky clothes,
- it does not mean he is a bad individualperson .

- In conclusion, the way of people dressing is not the
- most important aspect to point out theira persons - someone area person is through their daily

There you have it Eka, I hope the above remarks are helpful.
mehbub 3 / 7  
Sep 8, 2016   #3
Hi ekalamarsyari11,

I am following the below introduction structure for Discuss and opinion essay.

Introduction
Sentence 1- Paraphrase Question
There is an ever growing observable fact of justifying human by their physical appearance, such as how we look and how we dress, by family members, friends or even colleagues.

Sentence 2- State Both Points of View
It is often agreed that this is the right way whilst others oppose and refers it will lead to adverse ramifications.

Sentence 3- Thesis Statement
This essay agrees that the way one looks has no bearing on the job performance and everyone should be judged solely on his/her merits.

Sentence 4- Outline Sentence
Both viewpoints will be discussed in this essay and hence, will fortify the above statement.
mehbub 3 / 7  
Sep 9, 2016   #4
Hi ekalamarsyari11,

below is my conclusion,

By far the conclusion, while inhabitants can easily attract by latest fashion, majority still believe that people should be distinct based on their capabilities. However, as long as we are respectful towards the achievement, significance of merit will always remain upper hand.
hanhnguyenngx 2 / 2  
Sep 28, 2016   #5
First of all , people make their decisions based on their fashion ...
In addition , teenagers usually have unique ...
... or a lawyer is prone to wear business attire while others who are celebrities dress so trendy and more fashionable .


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