Hellooooo...,
Dumi has shown you how to deal with the best structure. What you do is to adjust.
Also, Arun0506 helps you write the opening sentence for intro in your essay.
Then Pahan has guided you firmly towards the grammatical mechanics.
So what can I do for you? :D
Okay, a few details:
Two questions to answer. Working with this essay, both questions must be covered.
Were I you, I started analyzing the prompt, like this;Fact: Nowadays the way many people intearact with each other has changed because of technology.
Question 1: In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? (One paragraph)
Question 2: Has this become a positive or negative development? (One paragraph)
whatsup, line, wechat, and skype
and
bus, train or plane
You must be consistent in your use of your chosen convention; either use the comma before 'and' all the time or not all.
Because, somebody can reach you or someone can know where you are easily even if you do not want to say it
...Called sentence fragment, writing incomplete sentences.
Correct by writing completing the sentences... ----> It is because somebody can reach..
a negative aspect
A difficult aspect. It is all about collocation, how words are often used together.
Good luck :)